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The Grim Reaper Major Gamer
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-22
| Subject: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:37 pm | |
| Born from hate and despair No one seems to care Mother dies leaves you alone Passed around for all to own rise up against them all Take pleasure in their gory fall It was on this day that you discovered the evil way Many want to end your life but they can get past your knife you plan demented schemes to bring to life your blood bathed dreams you want the masses to die hoping to see innocents cry you gathered so much fame that even Death fears your name in the way of war you've become skilled forgetting how many you killed striving to block out light creating an everlasting night hero's wills bend no longer able to defend beat the knave take him as your slave you have an unholy desire to set the world a fire letting darkness take its toll on your broken soul Your words of malice build your cursed palace Might as well take a bow because the world is yours now. ok you might recognize this format from Trials of a Hero. https://shadowfire.forumotion.net/poems-f10/trials-of-a-hero-t27.htm
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Miafire Administrator
Posts : 810 Join date : 2009-11-06 Location : Dog eat yer facee.
| Subject: Re: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:40 pm | |
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The Grim Reaper Major Gamer
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-22
| Subject: Re: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:46 pm | |
| Thank you mia. I thought it was good too. | |
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Miafire Administrator
Posts : 810 Join date : 2009-11-06 Location : Dog eat yer facee.
| Subject: Re: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:47 pm | |
| I'm guessing you used RhymeZone? :O | |
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The Grim Reaper Major Gamer
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-22
| Subject: Re: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:49 pm | |
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Miafire Administrator
Posts : 810 Join date : 2009-11-06 Location : Dog eat yer facee.
| Subject: Re: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:51 pm | |
| I'm getting so bad at poetry, that I use RhymeZone too often, now. Think I'll just quit the poetry buiseness. | |
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The Grim Reaper Major Gamer
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-22
| Subject: Re: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:55 pm | |
| *gasp* wait don't decided on that so soon. Maybe give your self a break and lety it all come back to you like i had too. or write a really bad one so you have a reason to make a better one. | |
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Miafire Administrator
Posts : 810 Join date : 2009-11-06 Location : Dog eat yer facee.
| Subject: Re: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:57 pm | |
| I've been thinking about it for a while, now, Hyro. And submitting the last poems I did.. I show no pride in them. I show nothing but shame. So.. that's it, for me. | |
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The Grim Reaper Major Gamer
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-22
| Subject: Re: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:58 pm | |
| *sighs louder* well i'll miss your poem style. | |
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Miafire Administrator
Posts : 810 Join date : 2009-11-06 Location : Dog eat yer facee.
| Subject: Re: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:59 pm | |
| Doubt it. You've got Nova, Mo and Kitkat, all into the dark style. Mo almost always was in it, too. Kitkat and Nova are starting to come to it. | |
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The Grim Reaper Major Gamer
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-22
| Subject: Re: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:07 pm | |
| ahhh but your poem style is one of a kind mia. | |
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Miafire Administrator
Posts : 810 Join date : 2009-11-06 Location : Dog eat yer facee.
| Subject: Re: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:10 pm | |
| No, it wasn't. Never was, never will be. Too many Twig poets are a heck lot better than me. Which includes You, Nova, Kitkat and Ave. I stand no chance. | |
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The Grim Reaper Major Gamer
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-22
| Subject: Re: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:13 pm | |
| what did i say about the self doubt mia. Leave that to me. Your good at poem writing but every writer writes at least one thing that they don't like. That doesn't mean you have to stop writing all together. | |
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Miafire Administrator
Posts : 810 Join date : 2009-11-06 Location : Dog eat yer facee.
| Subject: Re: Trials of a Villian Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:14 pm | |
| I've hated every single poem I've ever written. Maybe excluding two or three. But the rest, I've always hated. And I'd much rather my own self-doubt. | |
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