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PostSubject: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:37 pm

Born from hate and despair
No one seems to care
Mother dies leaves you alone
Passed around for all to own
rise up against them all
Take pleasure in their gory fall
It was on this day
that you discovered the evil way

Many want to end your life
but they can get past your knife
you plan demented schemes
to bring to life your blood bathed dreams
you want the masses to die
hoping to see innocents cry
you gathered so much fame
that even Death fears your name

in the way of war you've become skilled
forgetting how many you killed
striving to block out light
creating an everlasting night
hero's wills bend
no longer able to defend
beat the knave
take him as your slave

you have an unholy desire
to set the world a fire
letting darkness take its toll
on your broken soul
Your words of malice
build your cursed palace
Might as well take a bow
because the world is yours now.

ok you might recognize this format from Trials of a Hero. http://shadowfire.forumotion.net/poems-f10/trials-of-a-hero-t27.htm


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PostSubject: Re: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:40 pm


This poem is well worth a thousand Mia emotes. :O

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PostSubject: Re: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:46 pm

Thank you mia. I thought it was good too.
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PostSubject: Re: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:47 pm

I'm guessing you used RhymeZone? :O

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PostSubject: Re: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:49 pm

nope the top of my head
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PostSubject: Re: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:51 pm


I'm getting so bad at poetry, that I use RhymeZone too often, now.
Think I'll just quit the poetry buiseness.

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PostSubject: Re: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:55 pm

*gasp* wait don't decided on that so soon. Maybe give your self a break and lety it all come back to you like i had too. or write a really bad one so you have a reason to make a better one.
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PostSubject: Re: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:57 pm

I've been thinking about it for a while, now, Hyro.
And submitting the last poems I did.. I show no pride in them.
I show nothing but shame.
So.. that's it, for me.

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PostSubject: Re: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:58 pm

*sighs louder* well i'll miss your poem style.
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PostSubject: Re: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 1:59 pm

Doubt it.
You've got Nova, Mo and Kitkat, all into the dark style.
Mo almost always was in it, too.
Kitkat and Nova are starting to come to it.

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PostSubject: Re: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:07 pm

ahhh but your poem style is one of a kind mia.
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PostSubject: Re: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:10 pm

No, it wasn't.
Never was, never will be.
Too many Twig poets are a heck lot better than me.
Which includes You, Nova, Kitkat and Ave.
I stand no chance.

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PostSubject: Re: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:13 pm

what did i say about the self doubt mia. Leave that to me. Your good at poem writing but every writer writes at least one thing that they don't like. That doesn't mean you have to stop writing all together.
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PostSubject: Re: Trials of a Villian   Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:14 pm

I've hated every single poem I've ever written.
Maybe excluding two or three.
But the rest, I've always hated.
And I'd much rather my own self-doubt.

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