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PostSubject: Re: Deeathseeker   Sat Jul 10, 2010 1:29 pm


See, Hyro? It's pretty good! ^///^

Just a few grammar errors here and there. 'Tis all.

For your next poem, you should make it rhyme. *-*
This website oughta help with rhymes. I admit that I sometimes use it, too.
www.rhymezone.com

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PostSubject: Re: Deeathseeker   Sat Jul 10, 2010 1:31 pm

nah See why i didn't want to post it. I've been in a poem slump since my last one.
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PostSubject: Re: Deeathseeker   Sat Jul 10, 2010 1:32 pm

Oh come on! Trust me! That site it really helpfull! :3
So helpfull, even The Amazing Ave uses it. :O

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